Saturday, June 27, 2009

Life, clouds and voices abound

Floating in the clouds,
will you bring me down
or come up to join me?
I see a speck in the sky,
and will your face to it.
Hear the sound of the wind,
listen to your voice within!
euphoric rises in a tiny space...
This tiny space, the core
of all that went before.
How much more can it take?
You'll be surprised at its space.
Many memories lie in wait
to be evoked by you today
Tomorrow's yet another day
More life is definitely headed our way.


  1. I like!

    However, like a kill-joy English teacher (which I usually refuse to be, especially to people who write poetry!), I must ask you to revisit and reconsider the use of the apostophe in the line:"You'll be surprised at it's space."

  2. Thank you for letting me intrude on your words.


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