Friday, August 11, 2006

all for a smile

still grinning, long after you're gone
li'l shootin stars, drenching me in their warmth
washing over me like waves at sea
but i'm somewhere in the sky
soaring high above anything else...
only 'cause you smiled a while,
got my eyes dancing and feet bouncing.
fingers that itch to brush you by
just so you'd turn a little, gimme a smile,
look in my eyes and watch me fly.

5 comments:

  1. Nice!!
    I love the way the poem seems to flow endlessly...

    & well.. I'd turn ur comment back to you..
    Get a guy Farah!! Or a girl?!? :P
    Wait..
    This poem sounds like..
    Umm.. Have you already found him??
    ??
    ??

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  2. hey!!!were u stoned wen u rote dat poem???sure seems dat way.my interpretation:u take the needle,inject urself.wogay??this is th part where u r high.den the "smile" is the H takin effect.den ur watchn it "smile" n take anothr shot.nice huh??.n du u actually xpect us to blev it has anything to du with a guy??or a girl for dat matter??

    dont u jus hate me???
    i luv doin this.this s wht i live for.
    me,myself n another brick in the wall.

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  3. wow.. :)

    make way for the new age shakespeare and shez a woman.. WOOHOO..! :D make us proud..!

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  4. Nice...made me smile too :-)

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  5. aw :) thats so cute!! you should tolly write more.

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